I think the building shouldn't have a house on
top of the building.The building is huge.When the people go
to sleep they could go up the stairs and could go on top and go inside the house
and go to sleep.And when it is morning they can go down the stairs
and open the shop up.This is a very big building but when people walk past
they see a big shopping centre.I think there is probably a lot
of people in the shopping centre.
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To Maggie,
ReplyDeleteSo how will the people get inside the house up the top you said they would go up the stairs. Is there one massive staircase inside the shops or do they have to go outside a little bit to get to the front door of the house on top? Describe for me what it is like getting into that top house and how a person might feel about moving into that space.
What shops might be in this unusual shopping centre space?
From Mrs Head