Writing-Describing a character

This man is sitting down by a back round with hats going around him.It looks like the hat he is wearing it looks like a hat sitting on top of a crazy wig.And he is holding a cup of tea it looks like he loves the cup of tea.He has got a weard girlish bo on his jumper and his hands looks like a old mans hands.WoW he looks like a funny clown''.He is on Alice and wonderland he is funny.

Writing-Describing a setting

I think the building shouldn't have a house on

top of the building.The building is huge.When the people go

to sleep they could go up the stairs and could go on top and go inside the house

and go to sleep.And when it is morning they can go down the stairs

and open the shop up.This is a very big building but when people walk past

they see a big shopping centre.I think there is probably a lot

of people in the shopping centre.

THIS IS MY DRAFT PIECE OF WRITING. PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT TO LET ME KNOW HOW I CAN IMPROVE MY WRITING.